溺nm 发表于 2023-6-4 04:38   全显示 1楼
看了四章，作者文笔挺好的。看起来不会有太白的感觉。应该是位老作者了。。前面已经大概出现了三位角色了。希望不要在增加太多的角色。只要把文章写的饱满，故事情节紧凑不拖沓。就不会显得乏味。反之，如果出现太多的角色反而会增加文章的情节难度。可能导致文章乱。一点小小建议
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