| zhzhao8525 发表于 2010-7-25 01:18 只看TA 51楼 |
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| 写得很不错，希望还有后续。多谢楼主分享。 |
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| feng20070615 发表于 2010-7-25 01:18 只看TA 52楼 |
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| 如果这是原创 那我就衷心佩服楼主的想象力和文采 |
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| warbeast 发表于 2010-7-26 08:29 只看TA 54楼 |
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| This story i haven't been read it before but i have been read some kind of this story that are a little bit same?? But never mind still need thank you for master sharing it. |
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| aj19740712 发表于 2010-7-26 11:08 只看TA 55楼 |
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前文原是大先生所作《大唐双龙传节选》，后文（仙子发浪了......)是被别人胡乱加上的烂结尾！ 多年以前就非常渴望能够看到大先生续文，久候无音，没想到却被别人拿来糟蹋，无奈... |
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